2005 - 07-27-05

# 2005 - 07-27-05

From:

North of Jewfish Creek

Dear Friend & Subscriber,

In this newsletter, we are going to talk about
what makes "Can You Guess Part II?" ("A Valentine For
Jessica") such a good piece of writing.

I've already given you the reason why Part I and
Part III of the "Can You Guess" series were so
successful. Remember... the answer
was...

Specificity

But that is NOT the answer with "A Valentine For
Jessica". And, for those of you who haven't guessed already,
it was me who wrote "A Valentine For Jessica".

When I wrote that little essay, I'm not sure
exactly why I did it. I think mostly I wrote it because so many
people were always commenting about "The Gary Halbert Style"
of writing. I think all good writers do develop a "style" of
their own. But I think what I wanted to prove was, a really
good writer could write in almost any kind of style and from
almost any kind of "voice".

What most of you perceive as my "style" is
what you read in my newsletters. But it's my conceit I could
write a romance novel for women, an action novel for men, a
"legalese" contract, an ad for the Surgery Eye Centers of
Tennessee, and a Valentine for Jessica... and... none of the
people who read each of those would ever guess they were
written by the same person.

When it comes to writing... especially ad
copy... the best writing of all is...

Invisible!

When
you are selling something, you don't want people to notice
your style. That's why I don't very often use graphics.
That's why I am (for the most part) against graphic
designers, website designers, photographs in advertising,
and so forth. What I want is people to read the sales
message... and... not get distracted by graphics, style,
photographs, music, or anything else.